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Effective comedy is built on the same principles as effective drama. The movies appear to be a kind of screen anarchy, but believe me, the process of getting it up there is much different.
It gets to be a very scientifically designed process, actually. We spend a lot of time.
Obviously, the opening image—the first thing we see—makes your first impression. It implies something about your story—the location, the mood, or even the theme. The screenplay Body Heat opens with these words: Her eyes reflect the desire that will drive the movie.
Argo opens with the American flag burning at the embassy in Iran. Apocalypse Now opens with a jungle aflame and the surreal sounds of helicopters. Superimposed over this is the face of Captain Willard Martin Sheen watching a ceiling fan that reminds him of helicopter rotors. He is recalling his last mission. He is defining the context of his story. What is the context of your story? It will include the atmosphere or mood, the location, the emotional setting, and the genre.
Genre in this book refers to movie type: Communicate something about the rules, parameters, nature, and culture of the special world you have created in the first ten pages or so. You set the tone. In Signs, first we see the farm; then we see the central character wake up.
And then we see the crop circles in the corn. O Brother, Where Art Thou? Seabiscuit opens with photos of Depression-era cars and assembly lines: In Ghostbusters, we see a librarian scared by a ghost and we laugh our heads off. Supernatural comedy. Then we see Dr. Venkman Bill Murray hitting on a coed.
There are probably a thousand ways to portray this, but the writers stay in the genre. Venkman pretends the coed has ESP and that she needs his tutelage and support to understand her gift. Confidential, we meet two Los Angeles police officers in the s. Jerry Maguire opens with an introduction to the world of sports agenting. Scream begins with a long sequence of Casey Becker Drew Barrymore at home alone. Someone calls her, terrifies her, and asks her questions about horror movies.
The caller tells her the consequences are deadly if she answers the questions incorrectly. She answers incorrectly. Often this person will appear in the opening scene. Obviously, the primary opposition character must be introduced as well. This person does not have to appear as early, but could. We generally think of the protagonist as the good guy or hero, while the antagonist is the bad guy. In creating a story, I think it is helpful to think in terms of a central character and an opposition character.
Usually the protagonist is also the central character, but sometimes the role of central character goes to the antagonist. In Amadeus, Salieri, the bad guy, is the main cause of action and, therefore, the central character around whom the story is built. His opponent is Mozart, the good guy. The same holds true for the Joker in The Dark Knight. The Joker is the main cause of action, the central character and the antagonist. And certainly in The Ladykillers, the central character is Professor G.
Dorr Tom Hanks , and he is definitely the lead antagonist. Claire, the wife, is the primary opposition character, even though she is the protagonist good guy. Marlene is a secondary opposition character. In both Falling Down and Chronicle, the protagonist becomes the antagonist in the end.
You can see why I believe it is helpful to think in terms of a central character and opposition character s. One key to making a story dramatic is to create a strong central character with a powerful goal, and then provide a strong opposition character who consciously or subconsciously tries to stop the central character from achieving that goal. This assures us of conflict. And conflict is drama. Can there be more than one central character?
Students often present examples of dual central characters in a movie, and in most cases, the reality is that there is just one central character.
In The Hurt Locker, we have three main characters, but the central character is Sgt. William James, who happens to enter the story later than the other two, but who is most prominent in the end and carries the theme about addiction to war.
Mike is the central character in Monsters University. In truth, this is a genuine ensemble piece with no clear central character. All loose ends for all 10 characters are cleaned up nice and tidy. Ensemble films are certainly a valid form. Even so, they are usually difficult to write and sell; thus, I recommend that you build your story around one central character in your first screenplay.
The Catalyst is when Deb meets Napoleon at his doorstep, where she tries to sell him beauty aids. I explained that comedy has its roots in drama and then continued with the lecture.
Encouraged, I blabbered on. And who does Napoleon end up with at the dance?
And then he put the rest together. That, combined with his earlier dazzling footwork, is the Showdown or climax. Napoleon has not one but two goals that drive this movie.
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So his dancing is not only the Showdown for the get-Pedro-elected action plot, it also sets up his climactic meeting with Deb at the tetherball court resolution of the relationship plot. One way to avoid that is for something to happen in the first 10 pages.
It pains me to be so pointed, but I do so for your own good: I recall how delighted my agent was when he told me about a script he had just read, Regarding Henry. Imagine, shot on page seven! Somewhere in the first 10 or 15 pages of your script or earlier , something should happen to give your central character a goal, a desire, a mission, a need, or a problem.
Yes, it is a turning point. This term and many other terms are used in a variety of ways by industry people. For example, many writers and writing gurus think of the Big Event as the Inciting Incident.
Defining the terms is less important than understanding the principle. I use terms that I believe will be the most helpful and least confusing to understand.
When a story begins, life is in balance. Then the Catalyst kicks things out of balance and gives the central character a new problem, need, goal, desire, or mission. The central character spends the rest of the movie trying to get things back into balance.
The Big Event is his creation of the precursor to Facebook. In this case, the Catalyst motivates or leads naturally to the Big Event.
In Witness, an Amish boy witnesses a murder. It creates a problem or desire for Detective Book. Now he wants to solve the murder. In other words, the Catalyst begins the movement of the story. But the Big Event in Witness occurs later. The little boy peers through the trophy case at the police office and spots a picture of the killer.
Book realizes that the murderer is on the police force. He goes to the chief and reports this. Do you see that the Big Event is bigger than the Catalyst? The event that changes his life, however, is when he returns to the scene to bring water to a dying man the only humane act in the movie. He is now pursued until he is finally killed. She decides that the only way to land a hunk like Ian is to get away from her family and improve herself.
The Big Event is when Ian walks into the travel agency where she works. And now Woody has something of a problem to solve. He pays her to stay with him at the hotel: Jerry Maguire sees his client in the hospital, then writes a mission statement: He is fired: Independence Day. The aliens arrive: They attack and blow up the White House: They leave town to go fishing: You may ask, Can the Catalyst also be the Big Event?
Ghost and Regarding Henry are two examples, as is Juno the pregnancy. Keep in mind that I am presenting guidelines in this book, not hard-and-fast rules. It may raise the central dramatic question or obligatory question for that film. For example, will John Book in Witness catch the killer? Will E. Will Kowalski and Stone return to earth in Gravity? Will Edward and Viv find true love in Pretty Woman?
Will Pi Patel survive his adventure in Life of Pi? Can J. Wiatt Diane Keaton have it all—a family and a career—in Baby Boom? Will Chuck Noland in Cast Away survive and return home? Will the Americans escape from Iran in Argo? Often, a situation in a film can create a relatively minor obligatory question. The answer comes at the end: Tao gets it.
This large contraption is literally an extension of her arms and legs. At the end of the movie, she uses it to fight the big mama alien. Incidentally, we see a version of that contraption in the movie Avatar. We soon forget about it until it is skillfully used at the end of the movie to defeat the really bad military guy, Colonel Quaritch. The tetherball court is established in the first act of Napoleon Dynamite.
This new response is the measure of how things have changed for Napoleon. You can get away with almost anything if you set it up, or foreshadow it, early in your story. Much of screenwriting is setting things up for a later payoff. They can be pretty ridiculous, but as long as they are established early, we accept them. Look at all we learn in the first scenes of Raiders of the Lost Ark.
We learn that both Belloq and Indiana are resourceful, that Indiana hates snakes, and that he must recover the lost Ark of the Covenant. When we see this presentation again, Nash is the recipient. High Noon is a wonderful example of foreshadowing.
The audience is made aware of the terrible thing that might happen at high noon. This foreshadowing helps motivate conflicts between Marshal Will Kane Gary Cooper and his wife, and with certain town folk. In an early scene in Ghost, Sam Wheat Patrick Swayze watches an airline disaster on the news and comments about how quickly life can end.
Later he confides in Molly Demi Moore that he is afraid —every time something good happens in his life, something bad happens. This is a foreshadowing of his imminent death. There is also a suspenseful moment when a statue of an angel is moved into the apartment.
Can you guess what this foreshadows? Most are introduced early in the story. The whistle. This is also introduced appropriately late, and its payoff is powerful. A more sophisticated use of foreshadowing can be found in Slumdog Millionaire. Early in this tale of two brothers, young Jamal is willing to jump into a pool of excrement to get what he wants—the autograph of movie star Amitabh Bachchan.
This is really a microcosm of the entire story. Jamal is willing to go through crap for his love, Latika. But Salim has a good side: He saves his brother from blindness and slavery, and at the end he frees Latika from slavery.
Early in the script, a teacher asks the boys who the third musketeer is in the novel The Three Musketeers. Later, after they are orphaned, they see little Latika standing in the rain. Well, she is the third musketeer. This kind of inventive foreshadowing creates a sense of unity in a story, even when the audience may not be consciously aware of the foreshadowing and payoff.
It also becomes a tool of economy, providing more than one use for an object, story element, character, or line of dialogue.
A word of caution on the first act taken as a whole: Only give the audience what they need to understand the story and its special world without confusing them. As children, both Carl and Ellie are inspired by Professor Charles Muntz who later, with his dogs, becomes an opposition character.
As they become acquainted we see the following visual moments among others: It contains no dialogue; many small, touching moments; and the following visual elements: Most everything that follows derives from the above. Ellie and the house that symbolizes her become the motivating force of what Carl does thereafter. We see all of the above visual elements repeated later in the movie, including the grape soda pin.
The above opening sequence is a wonderful example of foreshadowing, but it additionally illustrates the importance of establishing emotional, motivational, and visual elements early. The screenplay as a whole is a lesson in economy.
The writers use objects and characters in this case, Muntz more than once, which lends the story a sense of unity. This is cinema at its best. I call these The Magnificent 7 Plot Points. The Backstory The Backstory is an event that generally occurs before the movie begins.
Other times it is revealed through flashback. Most often, it emerges through dialogue. The middle focuses primarily on the conflict and complications. The central character emerges from Act 1 with a desire to do something about the difficult situation created by the Big Event. Her action will likely fail, forcing her to take new actions. There will be many setbacks in Act 2, as well as some breakthroughs or temporary triumphs.
The long middle section Act 2 of a three-act structure usually focuses on a rising conflict rising action. Your reader will lose interest in a conflict that is merely repetitive: Strong subplots that crisscross with the main plot will help you avoid repetitive conflict because they will create more complications that ratchet up the main conflict.
Thus, the conflict builds or intensifies. The Midpoint At the Midpoint or Pinch of the story, about halfway through, another major event occurs. The central character often becomes fully committed. I sometimes think of it as the Point of No Return. In Ghost, this is when Sam, as a ghost, learns that his best friend is the one who had him killed. In Dave, the Midpoint is when Dave defies the chief of staff and acts as president.
This is truly a point of no return for Dave, the point when he becomes fully committed. There is no turning back now! Once she makes this decision to leave her social world, there is no turning back. She has reached the Point of No Return. Shortly after her decision, the ship strikes an iceberg. From the Midpoint on, the central character takes stronger actions, perhaps even desperate actions that threaten to compromise her values.
One or more temporary triumphs by the central character arouse the opposition, who now shows his true strength. There may be a major setback, followed often by a new revelation or inspiration.
This is when Charlie Babbitt in Rain Man discovers that his brother Raymond is the Rain Man of his childhood, and that his dad protected Charlie as a baby by putting the Rain Man Raymond in an institution.
Notice the rising action in the second half of Gran Torino. After spending his birthday with his Hmong neighbors, Walt Clint Eastwood puts Tao the boy who tried to steal his car to work in his yard. Tao has gang problems, so Walt gets Tao a job. Walt reacts by beating Smokie and telling him to lay off Tao.
This is the Crisis, the point when all seems lost, or when the central character faces a crucial decision. Often, someone or something spurs the character on to the Showdown. In Independence Day, the crisis is very dark, but a new revelation provides a glimmer of hope that moves our heroes to take one last gamble.
Basic American values and global unity are at stake. The same is true in Gravity. At the Crisis point when Stone Sandra Bullock turns off her oxygen so that she can die, she sees Kowalski who scolds her for giving up. In Moonstruck, everyone simply gathers around the breakfast table. Although Hollywood loves a happy ending, some of the most effective and affecting stories are bittersweet or end in some sadness: Easy solutions are not dramatic; better that your central character do his own rescuing in the end.
How does the writer compensate for this? Secondly, the pirates the teen pirate in particular elicit some sympathy or interest as desperately poor pawns of a warlord.
Thirdly, the resolution is not easy, but is dramatic with plenty of conflict. A lesser writer might have handled this with an overwrought line of dialogue: I realize there are exceptions to these guidelines. After all, the events in the magical land of Oz were part of a dream and the animals in Life of Pi were just representations of people—and I love those movies.
And apparently, everything in The Usual Suspects except the heist itself was made up by Verbal under interrogation.
How about the ambiguous ending of All Is Lost—does it frustrate you or lead you to some kind of statement or theme about life and death? Beginning, middle, end. His attitude toward Christmas is neatly summed up in two words of dialogue: In the end, the change in Scrooge is revealed through his charitable actions and words.
And the older you get, the more this happens and the fewer things you love. And by the time you get to be my age, sometimes you only love one or two things. Neo in The Matrix realizes that he can view the matrix as software code. Thus, he is able to destroy the antivirus code Agent Smith.
In this case, the realization is what gives the central character the ability to defeat the opposition. Jerry Maguire brings many elements together in the Realization.
This realization is never directly stated, but the audience recognizes it when Rod thanks Jerry in the interviews. Is Troy going to let Jerry represent him now? Looks like it to me. In Mr. Holland Richard Dreyfuss is rewarded for his years of dedication to teaching when all of his students return and play his composition for him.
He realizes that he has touched all of these students. In Groundhog Day, Phil Connors Bill Murray goes through the five stages of grief—denial, anger, bargaining, depression the Crisis , and acceptance—and then is presented to us at the town dance and bachelor auction. The town likes him, Rita likes him, and at long last he likes himself. In the beginning of Falling Down, we identify with William Foster Michael Douglas but soon lose affection for him as he declines. Detective Martin Prendergast Robert Duvall , however, grows.
So our affections shift to him. Prendergast has become a good cop and a man. Foster has a different realization. He has grown from sinner to saint. The realization of growth can be negative. At the end of The Godfather, Michael is able to lie to his wife while a patron kisses his ring. We realize that he truly is the Godfather. The overall realization for you as a writer is this: All of these examples provide an emotional pay-off to the reader of your script and to your audience.
Usually, the Realization is part of the Denouement. In summary, the Magnificent 7 Plot Points are: The Backstory usually happens before the story begins. It motivates or haunts the central character. The Catalyst kicks things off. We move to Act 2. We move to Act 3 the end. The Showdown or Climax is the final face-off between your central character and the opposition.
The Realization is usually part of the denouement. This book is not intended as a write-bythe-numbers text. It is your handy guide for a successful writing journey. In reality, you can do anything you want. Almost every guru and teacher has his or her model or paradigm for structuring and outlining a screenplay. Among them are the following in no particular order: They are provided by master teachers and are all worthwhile.
They use classic dramatic structure in inventive ways, in a few cases bending the framework. The tactic shocks the audience so forcefully that a tremendous amount of suspense is created, enough to carry us through the second act. One is about how Jules Samuel Jackson comes to believe that God has a mission for him.
Each of the two stories has a beginning, a middle, and an end, but the events are not presented in exact chronological order. Perhaps the most traditional and rigid of paradigms is the love story or rom-com romantic comedy basic structural model.
The two lovers generally meet at the Catalyst and are thrown together by the Big Event. But the Backstory gives rise to a flaw which interferes with love. Even so, they fall in love at the Midpoint or at least one does , and are separated at the Crisis.
In the Showdown, one or both overcomes the flaw and they come together. In the end, the Realization comes that they will live happily ever after.
Annie makes the Crisis decision by racing to the Empire State Building where she finally connects with Sam. At a key point during the second act, John Nash faces a crisis decision: He must choose between his wife Alicia and his imaginary life.
It is here he realizes that his imaginary friends do not age; he now believes he has found the key to solving his schizophrenia problem.
This leads to the main Crisis that determines his fate. This is followed by a longer-than-normal final act. I have no quibbles with any choices made because they worked wonderfully! Dramatic structure is at once firm and flexible. There are many ways to tell a story.
In fact, I maintain that structure is not the same things as formula.
Your basic structure may change or evolve as you write, so be open to new, creative insights. Every story has its own structure, its own life, its own way of unfolding.
Let your story and its characters use you, the writer, to express itself and themselves. The title you choose for your completed work should be short enough to fit on the marquee. Like the headline in an ad, the title must stop the reader and pull him into the story. Spy Kids has a direct appeal to its primary audience.
The premise is clearly implied: What if James Bond were a kid? Super Size Me was enough to grab my attention. That expression is well known by most people.
The title The Sixth Sense clearly communicates the genre and main idea of the story. Although a little long, Honey, I Shrunk the Kids is a superb title. It effectively conveys the idea of a fun sci-fi family comedy. An example of an ineffective title might be Raiders of the Lost Ark. I heard Sydney Ganis, the marketer of this project, explain how much he worried about this title.
Is this the football Raiders? How is this title going to fit on the marquee? Not to worry. The same is true for Argo; that title only makes sense after one has read the script. Nevertheless, in almost every case, an effective title can make an important first impression for your script, especially if it hints of a high concept.
In the dizzying world of moviemaking, we must not be distracted from one fundamental concept: If a movie begins with a great, original idea, chances are good it will be successful, even if it is executed only marginally well. Find great ideas. Keep asking yourself, Do you have a good idea here?
The concept sits at the core of every pitch, regardless of who is pitching to whom. When I hear a good concept, I immediately see a movie that I can sell. I realize there is an element of subjectivity here, but that should come as no surprise.
And as we will discuss later, most script deals are development deals in which your ability to execute an idea into a great script is paramount. Even so, look for great ideas. There is an implied structure in strong concepts. Two black brothers are out to adopt a younger brother to mold into an NBA player and get rich. They find only a white country bumpkin, then bring him to their neighborhood to make him a star.
You can almost see the beginning, the middle, and the end. You see the conflict. You see the fun.
Concept comes in many forms. For example, it can be presented as a premise question: What if Peter Pan grew up? Hook What if the devil had a son? The Incredibles The concept can be expressed as a logline. The logline is a one-sentence summary of the story or story concept. Terrorists hijack Air Force One. Air Force One Have you noticed that the logline, hook, or concept statement often centers around the Big Event, the first major turning point in the screenplay.
A legal secretary, after being fired and getting dumped by her boyfriend, receives a chain letter, then sends it to the people who wronged her, only to find them dead the next morning. It grabs you—hook, logline, and sinker. Most importantly, you as a producer know just how to sell it to the public. You know you can sell it to your particular market. You see the theater ad in the paper.
You see the DVD jacket. In this case, a movie with that title was made years later with the following updated logline: A maniac murders teens when they refuse to forward chain mail. The following logline became The Kid: A year-old boy time-travels 30 years into the future to save the overly serious man he will become. The concept is always a hook, which is any brief statement, premise, or logline that hooks someone into the story.
Lose the kids. Adventures in Babysitting Top Gun in a firehouse. Ghost Your girlfriend is able to have all memory of you blotted from her mind. What do you do? Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind These are very briefly presented concepts, but they grab your attention enough to make you want to get to the substance behind them.
A teenage computer hacker breaks into the Pentagon computer system. War Games Or how about this one: The concept statement is important for another reason. The concept is what hooks—or fails to hook—the agent or producer. Some of the best concepts present something extraordinary happening to someone who is ordinary— someone just like us.
That something extraordinary is often—you guessed it—the Big Event. This is the intelligent, character-focused The Fisher King. The fish-out-of-water concept is always popular—a character is thrown into a whole new situation or lifestyle, as in Beverly Hills Cop. As I mentioned earlier, successful concepts often combine something familiar with something original. Instead of the familiar black sheep of the family, we have the white sheep of the family.
Speaking of a twist on an old idea, a high school version of My Fair Lady sold for low six figures. Can you see why this next concept sold? A teenager is mistakenly sent into the past, where he must make sure his mother and father meet and fall in love; then he has to get back to the future. It presents a clear beginning, middle, and end.
Keep in mind that most scripts sold are not produced. In fact, only about one in 10 of the scripts downloadd and developed are ever produced. Even million-dollar scripts are sometimes not made: But the money still changes hands. Of course, not all production companies are looking for high-stakes action. But regardless of the company, they all are looking for an angle they can use to sell the kind of movie they want to produce. One of the many pluses of having a powerful concept is that the execution of the concept into a screenplay does not have to be superior.
In other words, the higher your concept, the more forgiving producers will be with your script. Also, many of the loglines, hooks, and concept statements in this section are for character-driven stories. Also, keep in mind that stories are about characters with problems. For example: A starving sexist actor masquerades as a woman to get a role in a soap opera.
As you can see, high concept does not necessarily mean high adventure. Tootsie is neither, but the concept is strong, and the character growth arc is implied.
The same is true for Philadelphia. No one would take on this case. I suggest something like this: A black attorney prejudiced against gays gets one as a client who himself is the victim of prejudice.
Do you see the unique character hook in that pitch? There are two reasons you should clearly understand your core story concept. First, you need to know what your story is about, what makes it special or unique. After all, many if not most of the great movies of all time are character-driven. In this case, I might opt for something like this: What if you learned that your friends and work only existed in your imagination? Regardless of how mainstream or non-mainstream your story is, ask yourself these questions as you begin the writing process: What is at the core of my story?
What makes my story stand out? Keep in mind that there are numerous markets for screenplays besides the big-budget Hollywood scene. Also, the above section is written more from a marketing viewpoint than an artistic viewpoint.
This is one of my few carved-in-stone rules. There are three basic steps to writing an adaptation: Read the novel or play for an understanding of the essential story, the relationships, the goal, the need, the primary conflict, and the subtext. Identify the five to 10 best scenes. These are the basis for your script. Write an original script.
In fact, Linda Seger has written an entire book on the subject. A script cannot hope to cover all the internal conflict that the novel does, nor can it include all the subplots that a long novel can. Novels often emphasize theme and character.
They are often reflective, but movies move. These are all reasons why novel lovers often hate movie versions. But Hollywood thrives on adaptations.
When you adapt, you must decide how faithful you want to be to the original book. Some adaptations reinvent the story. For example, Apocalypse Now is adapted from Heart of Darkness, which is set in a different continent and in a different century. Jurassic Park is a novel that was adapted for the screen. The book is science-driven, an intellectual experience as much as an emotional experience.
Spielberg saw the high concept: What if you could make dinosaurs from old DNA? First, the central character becomes the paleontologist.
This provides a more youthful hero. He grows to like them by striving for his goal. There is no love interest in the book, but Dr. Ellie Sattler Laura Dern fills that role in the movie. Although the character development in the movie is thin, the above changes make for a more visual and emotionally accessible film. The focus of the movie, of course, is on the dinosaurs, the T-Rex in particular.
Hey, movies are visual. I think the right choices were made. The goal, as defined here, is whatever your central character outwardly strives for. Of course, opposition makes it almost impossible to reach the goal. Beneath it all lies a usually unconscious or subconscious need. The need, as defined here, has to do with self-image, or finding love, or living a better life—whatever the character needs to be truly happy or fulfilled.
This yearning sometimes runs counter to the goal and sometimes supports or motivates it. The Crisis often brings the need into full consciousness. Usually the need is blocked from within by a character flaw. This flaw serves as the inner opposition to the inner need. This character flaw is obvious to the audience, because we see the character hurting people, including himself.
The flaw is almost always a form of selfishness, pride, or greed. Where does the flaw come from? Something happened before the movie began or sometimes in the first scene that deeply hurt the character. That Backstory haunts the character enough that he acts in inappropriate or hurtful ways. Vincent Benedict Danny DeVito is the central character.
There is a strong outward opposition to this goal—a really bad guy wants the money as well. Vincent also has a need of which he himself is unaware.
He needs the love of a family. This is the character flaw, and it is motivated by his Backstory. Vincent can never have what he truly needs until he gives up his selfish and self-pitying point of view. This is a neat little story because the goal and the need happen to oppose each other at the Crisis. Vincent must choose between the two. He can escape with the money his goal , but someone holds a gun on his brother his need.
What will Vincent decide? At this crisis moment, he finds himself unable to leave his brother. Vincent reformed.
He gave up something he wanted for the sake of his brother. Fortunately, in the end, he gets both a family and the money. And his wound is healed. The writer gives the audience what they want, but not in the way they expect it. It is sometimes referred to as the spine or the external journey.
It is sometimes referred to as the heart of the story or the emotional through-line or the internal journey. In most James Bond films, has no flaw or need, only a goal and an urge. One is the main plot, the other a subplot.
Hopefully, the two stories are intertwined synergistically. Again, Twins serves as a good example. The action is what keeps us interested, but the emotion is what touches us. The movie is really about a relationship. When Bertie was a small child, he was teased by his brother and denied food by his nanny; this is the Backstory. This wound expresses itself in the form of stammering. The stammering is a physical flaw with moral consequences: A voiceless king cannot adequately serve his people in their time of need.
The crisis comes when Bertie learns his therapist has no credentials. He feels betrayed. This event forces the crisis decision to retain the therapist or not. This happens to be the crisis for both the action and relationship stories. In the end, the wound is healed. Bertie becomes a good king and his therapist a trusted friend. In Gone with the Wind, Scarlett has several goals.
She wants to be seen by all the boys. She wants to get married. She wants never to eat radishes again. She wants to save Tara. And she wants Ashley, which is probably her main goal. Rather complex. It may even sound confusing until you realize that the story is really about what she needs—Rhett Butler. Scarlett is outwardly striving for all the things just named, but she is not consciously after Rhett.
Nevertheless, the movie belongs to Scarlett and Rhett. She wants to find the stone so she can save her sister. Is this a clear and visual goal? Is her goal opposed by anyone?
Zolo wants it, as do the kidnappers. And Jack Colton Michael Douglas wants the stone so he can download a boat and sail around the world. What does Joan Wilder need? Is she striving for romance?
She writes out her fantasies in her romance novels. In this story, she gets what she needs by striving for the goal and overcoming her flaw. The stone is the external journey; the romance is the internal journey and character arc. In my script-consulting work, I receive many scripts that are completely missing a goal.
She tells me she has a script about a woman who goes on vacation to South America and falls in love with an adventurer. So I ask Diane about the goal.
You need an action track for this inside story to roll on. She consciously wants to have a good vacation. She deserves it after all that writing. It appears as though she has a complete story now, but I disappoint her. Something specific has to happen.
This problem is so common that I strongly urge you to stop and examine your story. Are you missing a specific goal and an action track for your wonderful inside story to roll on? Variations on the action and emotion tracks In Back to the Future, the outside story plot, as you would expect, is action-oriented.
So far so good. The inside story plot, however, is driven not by a need, but by a second relationship goal: Marty wants to get his mom and dad back together again. This results in twin crises at the end of the story, side by side. First, can Marty get his parents to kiss before he disappears into oblivion? Can Marty, in the DeLorean, hit the wire at the same moment that lightning strikes the tower? Is there an inner need in this movie? In The Sixth Sense, two characters go through a mutual healing.
Malcolm Crowe wants to help Cole, but needs to communicate with his wife and accept his separation from her. His Backstory is the first scene of the film; he is shot by a former patient. His flaw is that, like other dead people in this film, he sees only what he wants to see. He achieves his goal of helping Cole and meets his need by communicating with his wife and seeing the truth.
Cole wants to stop being scared by dead people, but his need is to communicate with them and also with his mother.
In this case, his flaw is not motivated by a specific backstory. Successfully reported this slideshow. We use your LinkedIn profile and activity data to personalize ads and to show you more relevant ads. You can change your ad preferences anytime. Screenwriter's bible 6th edition read [pdf].
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